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Heaven is Hell Without You by ~Nightgazer27913:iconNightgazer27913:



Her smile was a sure thing
A never fading, special something
She had a way about her
So sure of everything

She was my reason for waking up
My only dream when I'd sleep
Her eyes told the world her secrets
But she hid her pain underneath

What I wouldn't give to hear her voice
See her one more time
I'd walk through broken glass
to keep you here tonight

Chorus:
Her smiles a ghost
My personal poltergeist
Her laugh hid everything
All the secrets keep me awake tonight
I hear her voice
Everywhere I go
I just hope she knows I love her
I hope she knows

She had me from day one
Wrapped around her finger
Hangin' on her everword
Didn't see past this paradise
But she had plans of her own accord

I'd call just to hear her voice
And keep her close to me
But she panicked, choked, that's what I'm told
Said it was over, had to set me free, that was her choice
Hung up the phone and set free her own soul

Now I'm left with your memory

Chorus:
Her smiles a ghost
My personal poltergeist
Her laugh hid everything
All these secrets keep me awake tonight
I hear her voice
Everywhere I go
I hope she knows I think of her at night
(I try to make this alright)
I hope she knows

Bridge:
I'd give up these wings
To feel you here with me
I'd go through hell for you
Rather than go this life alone
Just to be with you
I'd damn us both

I just hope you know
(I'm stuck with your memory)

Chours:
Your Smiles a ghost
My personal poltergeist
Your laugh hid everything
All these secrets you didn't dare tell me
Now I'm alone tonight
I hear your voice everywhere I go
But baby I hope you know I love you
Before you go, just wanted you to know....
©2008-2009 ~Nightgazer27913
:iconnightgazer27913:

Author's Comments

storyline: guy singing to his girl
enjoy!

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:icontsukiko1313:
I wish I could hear this put to music...it's so beautiful. Mind if I ask my friend to write music for it?? I can connect to this perfectly. It matches something I've been felling almost exactly.

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You're so much better and your so different, you don't believe in what they do, I know you are one of us. ~Blutengel, Angels of the Dark :blackrose:

Member of ~OrochiBitches
:iconnightgazer27913:
ok then? uh i have a kind of idea with music for it but if you want your friend to be my guest. just don't steal it as your own. i trust you. =]

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Here's to falling asleep miles apart
and never being alone
Here's to drinking in the moment
and learning to stand or fall on your own.
:icontsukiko1313:
I wouldn't do that!! There's nothing worse than an art thief. But nah...I'd rather hear your version...is it possible for you to record it?

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You're so much better and your so different, you don't believe in what they do, I know you are one of us. ~Blutengel, Angels of the Dark :blackrose:

Member of ~OrochiBitches
:iconnightgazer27913:
and get it to you how? i'll try but i don't know if it will work.

--
Here's to falling asleep miles apart
and never being alone
Here's to drinking in the moment
and learning to stand or fall on your own.
:icontamuril-marie:
oh this is so beautifully sad...

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Just once in my life, I think It'd be nice...just to lose control just once...

Lose Control - Evanescence

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:iconnightgazer27913:
thankies! glad you like it. :D

--
Here's to falling asleep miles apart
and never being alone
Here's to drinking in the moment
and learning to stand or fall on your own.
:iconkiyako:
Oh My Gaw - Like for real, this really made me want to cry! This is really good and the fact that I can somehow relate

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"The unrequited dream
The song that no one sings
The unattainable"
~*Vermillion PT2
:icontsukiko1313:
I'm not sure. Do you have one of those computers that let you record sound on a mic?

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You're so much better and your so different, you don't believe in what they do, I know you are one of us. ~Blutengel, Angels of the Dark :blackrose:

Member of ~OrochiBitches
:iconnightgazer27913:
thankies. I'm glad to hear you like it! =]

--
Here's to falling asleep miles apart
and never being alone
Here's to drinking in the moment
and learning to stand or fall on your own.

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